Feddy's Sketchbook ^^

[feddyg]

Hi all, a newbie around the forum lol.

Some sketches i did during my freetime, feel free to comment :smilieDumb:

http://i212.photobucket.com/albums/cc320/yhgoh86/Drawn/Touhoud21.jpg
*Sketched in bunk previously during a long free time

[AlienJ]

haha.. not bad is really nice, u are good on ur line work.
But try to resize abit quite big

[lin]

Ya, the lines are nice, and the shading even more so! The eyes look very bright and "liquid". The hand needs some practice though. ^^ (hands are hard to draw, aren't they? I really think so. >.< )

[feddyg]

lol true >< how's this? after resized ..

hands are very very hard lol, but i find legs worst hehe

[feddyg]

finally some time to draw~
http://i212.photobucket.com/albums/cc320/yhgoh86/Drawn/Touhoud2copya.jpg
*Added 4th Oct~

[lin]

Oooh my... XD

Is she, er, holding up her skirt? Hmmm, cos if she is, there should be a fold of cloth coming out of her hand on the other side, ie, her last fingertip will be hidden. ^^

[feddyg]

oh ya, tks for reminding lol

[Mrv]

Nice sketches you've got there. You might want to control the up and down strokes when you use a pen, especially for hatching.

For the 2nd pic, you might to check the collar bone and how it connects to the chest, its a bit too low right now. Also, don't worry too much about cloth folds, its better to have a few good folds then a lot of folds to suggest bending/folding etc.

Eitherways keep it up, make use of all the lobo time in army to doodle stuff! :xD:

[feddyg]

hm.. true, didn't notice the mistake myself lol, thanks for the advice =D

[feddyg]

some sketch during freetime, and my second time coloring with photoshop lol, feel free to advice =P

http://i212.photobucket.com/albums/cc320/yhgoh86/Drawn/Alyssiavcolor.jpg

[lin]

looking good. ^^ I like her skin, hair n eye colour combo. The shadow on the skirt is very nice; makes me feel like there's really folds there.

I'm noob at colouring so no advice there; but I think for the drawing part, it might be nicer if the different strands of hair are more irregular(ie, different thicknesses; slightly different lengths, something like that.)

Hope to see more! ^^

[Darkwind was Here]

hihi, welcome to sganime :D

i feel that overall can be improved; not a problem if keep drawing more :)
for #5 you might want to notice the inconsistency between her sleeves (one rigid one soft)


ganbatte~ :)

[winter_hyde]

nice colours.... for the last pic on the tanned girl..maybe you can add more flow to the clothes to give a blown by the wind feel..

[Mrv]

Nice sketch and colouring of the tan girl, she's cute! You might want to check where the lightscource comes from. Try laying down a flat colour before you start adding any lightscources etc.

[feddyg]

hehe tks tks for the comments, still got alot of stuff to learn lol

currently drawing/coloring from stuffs i had seen, how do u guys learn and do drawing?

[butasaxo]

enjoyed looking at ur sketch. nice work. gives me this urge to start drawing again.

comments: the finger to her mouth dont quite make sense. Shouldnt the line at e finger be erased since it is attached to the palm? just wondering is it the index finger or the middle finger she is using.

The choice of colour is gd. However, have to consider the direction of the light when you add colour, as the shades of colour will tell where the direction is

[feddyg]

lol tks, yea will take note of e light source nex time ^^

and its the middle finger btw =P